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Ur a Fake

You and your posse are walking around
Laughing at me and bringing me down
“UR A FAKE"
The words that I hear day after day
I separate myself from your lies
Because I know that deep down inside
You're the one that is hiding yourself
Trying to be something that you're not
Even though you wish you could just let loose
And show the world yourself
But your friends won't allow it
Because then they would start screaming
"UR A FAKE-UR A FAKE-UR A FAKE-UR A FAKE"

not being yourself is making you obscene

Well, what do you think?

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  • speakno3vil
    August 20, 2008
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    well i wouldnt want to be real anyway!


  • InRegardsToMyself
    August 19, 2008

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    I loved, absolutely LOVED the ending.. it was one of those epic lines that i crave for at the end of every poem i read... not one to many deliver them, but your sure as hell did...

    All in all great job with this one


  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    July 6, 2008

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    hmmmmm.....I think I may know who this poem is about, if indeed it is about some individual at school.............lol. Well, I'm going to start up another contest soon but I want more points before I do so I'm coming back to comment on all your poems that I didn't get to last time. And since you're at camp, you'll have a TON of new notes/comments when you come back.......if you come back to ap. ttyl!