LOVE
love what is it exactly
some say its the joy you feel when you find that one speical person
others say its the pain you feel when you've lost something very dear to you
some say they dont belive in love ....
ive expericed love a few times in my short time on this plane of exitnce
ive laughed, cried, hated felt all emotions i could possible feel
all i know is love will hurt you in ways nothin else can
make you wish you could just disappear back into the heavanly body
of the night sky filled with beatiful stars to find peace for your heart
but you can not you must face this pain and force your way through
for even though you feel dead on the inside
a goddess will rekindle your flame in your heart to bring that
which you fear most back is love
you welcome it with open arms even though you fear of gettin burned
but that is what makes you human to love and be loved
if not for that would we be nothin but shells of nothing ness
the sky would be filled with the sad song of the stars if no one loved
so we must go on and love and be loved
just hope you find it quick
nothing worse than lovin some one and not gettin loved back
or bein alone so alone in the dark of cruel life
wantin some one to find you
you cry out but no one anwers you but an echo......
by
kevin embry
4/8/08
A contest entry
- In The Soul by whatever666.
600 points, ended April 15, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - how far?? by onapedestalIstand.
300 points, ended May 6, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I know what you mean..may be happening a bit to me at this point.." nothin worse than lovin someone and not gettin lovede back.."...hmm...start to question why? does that happen??
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Great poem here Kevin... I know the feelings that you explain in this poem... it is a very powerful piece that you wrote... It really moved me the first time I read it... You have a great talent of writing... Keep it up...
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very nice..I really like this..lovely write....sarah
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thanks
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aint that the truth
you hold the truth about life in your words. pouring out whats in your heart and soul and for that i thank you. everyone falls in and out of love, so we must go on and love and be loved. god bless
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