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Isn't that what love means?

A night in dreams he came
entered my voice
(stole my soul)

Forever enchained now
by his black as night eyes

Forsaken by his brutally soft lips
The warmth of his embrace
(makes me tremble)
only makes his absence hurt even worse

My desperate
 (weak)
will looks for his skin
my arms reaching for his words

I'd own his voice till eternity stops breathing
I would enchain his heart in the silver prison of my mind
and I would never set him free

Isn't that what love means?

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008

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    Very nice write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    Nice imagery and interestingly written.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 29, 2008

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    WOWZAAAA!

    now this pulls you in and holds you captive...mixed emotions running wild then that powerful question...Isn't that what love means?

    congrats on the Silver, well worth it *hug*

  • phoenixonfire
    April 22, 2008

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    Love the imagery and emotional collabration in the write! The last line contradicts ur whole poem and leaves a lasting impact! Wonderful work..

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    pri

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