Cold
Dark
Stone
Floors
Take my scenses
To a whole new level
Iron
Bars
Hold
Me
Inside
Forever trapped
Always lost and forgoten
Stolen away
I hide my tears behind swollen eyes
I hide my scars in cotton that itches my skin
And I hide my fear in the saftey of knowing that I cant have upset daddy today
But that never stops him....
A contest entry
- Run Away with Your Imagination... by VoltaicHypnosis.
950 points, ended April 15, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - April is Abuse Awerness Month by FallenFromGrace1102.
340 points, ended May 2, 2008, 68 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me cry....options =] and PW allowed :D by LeilaJayne.
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what do ya think?
Comments
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Well its good that you're working on the recovery and venting your feelings
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This is truly chilling. The third stanza really gets you. Phenomenal work! I am sorry if any of this is truth and not fiction
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Unfortunately my story is true my dear...x
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HARSH, PAINFUL...
you really have a gift with words, that last line, OMG! such a messed up world we need to find our way in, keep writing, it has kept me as sane as i pretend to be all of these years, BRAVO!
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great write keep up the awesome work. i wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Ooooh... dark and chilling. A nice dark background would help set the mood - but for once, the b/g doesn't impact on the words. Fine- and simply crafted art, this has really caught my attention. Good work and Best of luck...
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