Theres nothing here to be saved
I guess im just to afraid..
I dont know what happens when the
tide collides
or when its
time to say goodbye,
I think it'd all be much easier
If all this was just a lie
but I dont want it to be.
I'm way to much content with
Reality
And if I start to feel any less
Dangerous,
I'll have to break this complicated equation
Down for us
And I'm not saying that it's okay,
If you were to just
walk
a w a y.
With tears forming
At the cracks of my eyes, I'd ask you to stay
At least...just one more day
And we'll be holding onto
Memories
With the goodbyes floating in the sea
It's not something we can fake
defenitly not something we'll be able to take
But,
We have to make it
Or else the future will be much more bland
walking across an empty street
No one to sweetly hold a hand,
Or glance at me causally sideways
We'll make it. because i won't just sit on
The yesterdays
And though I like remembering
The memories,
They are worthless and pointless, and not well ment
If you
are absent
In Our Future
© 2008, Angie Romans. All rights reserved.
No republication of this material, in any form or medium, is permitted without express permission of the author.
Author notes
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A contest entry
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Comments
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I'm not very much into free verse but I must say I found your poem quite refreshing.
There are so may vivid images in this piece - images created by the creative and imaginative use of words. As an example:
"And I'm not saying that it's okay,
If you were to just
walk
a w a y."
I love it! -
wow
Loving the enjambment, Loving this line... "We'll make it. because i won't just sit on The yesterdays" really beautiful words!
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i love it so much <3 thanks for entering
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