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Poetry to Me

I am but a young poet
With so much to learn
So my dear friend
I'll tell you what poetry is
Poetry flows in my nerves
It flows in my blood
And drips like constant water
From the tips of my pen
Every word I write is full of poetry
Every touch of my pen on paper
Testify for this art
Poetry rests in my heart and mind
It brings avalanche in my heart
It floods my mind
If I were an artist
Poetry would be my art
Poetry is like rain
dripping onto paper...

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i chose option one for gold

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    Very lovely! My favoritel line is without a doubt "Poetry is like rain dripping onto paper" I see allot of potential in you and your work and even though you are new at this, I can see you have what it takes. NEVER let a contest get you down. Many famous writers have lost contest, so even if you get a HM or a Bronze, don't think the poem wasn't good enough!!! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder!

    Only people who connects with you, and your work can apprecaite it.

    I really liked this. Hope you will enter again!

    Becks