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Loving him

Loving him I watched him go,
wanting him to know that I would do anything to make him happy.
To pick him up when he was down,
never allowing him to hit the ground.
To make him smile when his world fell apart,
I gave him my soul and he stole heart.
Loving him I watched him go,
I just want him to know that I'm here forever with him.
For his love, he'd name a price.
to cross the ocean,
to catch a star,
For him I'd go no matter how far.
Loving him I watched him go.....
just wanting him to know I love him.

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I still love him and I'd go to the ends of the earth for him.

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  • EmmaLuLu
    April 15, 2008
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    WOW!!


  • geron
    April 11, 2008
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    beautiful i can see that u choose "everything" for his love.
    really nice


  • shaunice
    April 10, 2008
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    that was a really great poem
    heart felt to me
    very deep