Where are you baby, You're staring into space
A million miles away some other time and place
Where are you baby, Look me in the eyes
Eyes that tell me more than you'll ever realise
Baby I see the tears you haven't cried
I see the pain you keep inside
I see the hurt you try to hide
Please baby let it go.
Who are you missing baby, While you're here with me
You may be looking at me but who do you see
Who are you kissing baby, Each time are lips touch
Lips that tell me more without having to say much
Baby who's the one that holds the key
Keeps your heart from loving me
Let me in set yourself free
Please baby let it go
What is it baby, Say what's on your mind
I need you to be honest I don't need you to be kind
What is it baby, What is it you can't say
You want to tell me something but the words get in the way
Baby release the feelings from within
You don't have to keep them in
Forget your past let your future begin
Please baby let it go
Why can't you see baby, The way you make me feel
Or do you see it all but refuse to think it's real
Why can't you see baby, How scared I am too
Scared of believing I'm afraid of trusting you
Baby its time you realized
I've got no need for alibis
You've had your share of pain and lies
Please baby let it go
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Comments
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i really enjoyed this poem. I words you used are true for so many people. I bet a lot of people can identify with this poem
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Yessa! I loved this one.
I loved the rhyme and form you used,
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this piece sings comfort while dripping in retreat feeling so easy...so beautiful in a sensual waltz..a truly great piece.
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ah to look in the eyes with pure honsty in the name of love - that is waht i picked up on here
a good poem full of deep feelings and life swirling love
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