carved riches of sterling curves
surround the dark suggestion of a
greedy slice of jealousy and somber
thoughts of the unadorned life
Author notes
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A contest entry
- PIF 15 poets 20-30 words.. by poppa.
1050 points, ended April 11, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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You say so much with so few words. Well done
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Whoa. Unique and stunning ... fabulous poem!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I like your "surround the dark suggestion of a greedy slice of jealousy"
Well, actually, I liked all of it.
Marlene -
Really like this take on the prompt!! Depth of thought in that... and such truth!
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Well penned. Great take on the prompt! Good luck in the contest...
Ken
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