There is said, to be a girl
A very beautiful soul, rich with wonder
But she is very silent, not willing to talk
Not very willing to show herself to a stranger
She is a very torn spirit
Rising every night at the time of her end
To wander the very place where her life was taken
By the cliff, where she tripped
And fell upon the rocks below, the envy of those who wish to end
She wanders the night, scared by the things she sees
And is torn by those she scares
She looks very haunted, but why not?
After all, she is a ghost, a Haunted Memory.
A contest entry
- ~Ghost~ by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended April 11, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes by vampireprincess.
315 points, ended June 25, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ghosts, Ghouls and Spooky Tales - Ages 13 to 17 by The Fun House.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark, dark, and even darker by Luciferschild.
600 points, ended February 24, 94 entries
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Comments
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This poem was definitely very interesting and emotional, it is written in a way were almost anybody could relate
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this is me
great write...yet again
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god you took my breath away that was beautiful
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I liked it, very nicely written. My favorite lines were:
"A very beautiful soul, rich with wonder
But she is very silent, not willing to talk
Not very willing to show herself to a stranger"
keep up the good work. =)
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ah this is lovely!! very well written^^
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oh i wonder how many ghosts roam the clifftops, This was a great entry into the contest. nicely written. well done and good luck.
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OMGOSH THAT IS AMAZING
i really like this i can just imagine a girl walking off the side of a cliff and then you go and look for her and you realize she was just a Haunted Memory
wow man great job
angela
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It was good!
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this is sad but i like it.
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wow! this is sad but i like it. i can relate to it.
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O.O WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*praising* you are too good
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This is well written, but I think it could be more powerful, if that makes sense. The words could be revised. I do think, however, this is poem has a strong message!
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Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck, Josie
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this is beautifully creepy, you have talent =)
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