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Warrior Spirit & Soul

To be a warrior is not a simple matter

of wishing to be one.

It is rather an endless struggle

that will go on

to the very last moment of our lives.

 

No one is born a warrior,

in this same way,

no one is born an average man.

 

We make ourselves into one or the other.

Every society , culture & people

are judged by how it treats

it's least fortunate amongst them.

 

A warriors strength is gained

by honor, respect & humbleness.

Walking beside each other,

never ahead or behind on the path.

 

Author notes

These words were taught to me throughout my lifetime. It is a lesson for all walks of life, not just native americans but the whole world. Many work for harmony and peace but many warriors are still needed.
(The name T'Challa is a spirit name given to me many years ago.)

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  • Dark Otter
    August 29, 2008

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    A great choice to share

    for the group. The understanding of what a true warrior is a true understanding of how to follow the spiritual path. I recognize that his aspect goes deeper than surface values.


  • rbruce gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    Spirituality is universal throughout our world of different peoples and cultures. Our perceptions may be different but the spirits inhabit us all. Thank you for your poetic thoughts.May we all learn to go 'walking beside each other'.


  • libithina
    May 14, 2008

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    I thought that the message in this was so profound simple but true
    'walking beside each other'
    'never ahead or behind'
    sharing the spirit
    thankyou Niaish for the read

  • PureCountry
    April 24, 2008

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    Perfectly Purposed

    and works well with the prompt. We have warriors all around, just not as we would think of perceiving them, yet we need so many more.

    I thought of Two Wolves as I read this. Greet my brother and tell him so.

    Niaish for sharing.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Now this is something that is not only very deep and thought provoking but also something to ponder on whilst meditating. Great piece mum... it is real.


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Mother what a beautiful write this was truely beautiful and yes we need more warriors. I wish that each day that I could become strong enough to be one of those warriors. *bows to mother* Stay Strong
    I love you

    Gentle Wind (Leona)

  • midnightblue1272
    April 10, 2008

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    Bravo!

    This is so true. This lessons is the same way for warriors as for other people. Treat others the way we would like to be treated. Fine work.


  • Desire gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Magnificent!!

    Love this piece You have penned my Friend and the message to accompany

    No one is born a warrior,
    in this same way,
    no one is born an average man.
    Touches Spirit~~
    These words grabbed~~

    Happy to see that quill dancing~~
    Welcome back
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    A very strong poem, in content and your own belief in the words but could be misunderstood in these materialistic times. As now most judge you by your monetary gains and possessions. A poorly clothed person may be rich in good loyal friends, loving family and a sunny disposition. While the well dressed in the large house may be wanted for what they have got, with no one at all who likes them as a person. The true warrior sees the reality beyond the facade. Very well done my sister.


  • Dragonmind
    April 10, 2008
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    That's so true SpiritMother.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    This poem of shared wisdom speaks to the heart. Your insights may be unpopular in this day and age of medioracy but none the less true. A warrior must stand for the beliefs of his heart and be faithful in looking out for the weak and less forunate. Very well stated in your poem. Niaish for sharing such time honored truth.

    Gray Elk (dennis)

  • davidwright silver member
    April 10, 2008
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    An excellent piece. Thoughtful and provacative. Good luck in the competition. Happy trails

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