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Rock Steady

He fumbled with her bodice.
She smiled, cause she was modest.
They twain looked quite a sight.
Him struggling; her sitting on subtle dynamite.
Ending result, they both motioned for a pause.
'Cause he wanted to investigate the 'stimulation' clause.
Temporarily satisfied, but still dreaming big,
he wondered if he could get her to 'try' the wig.
Some extra motivation may enhance this dance.
Naively she consented to strutt her stuff for him.
Bringing him to more enhancement,
could pay off in the sticky end.

The romp progressed more smoothly.
The plan was working fair.
Some progression here and there.
His manhood did him justice,
coming through like a champ.
They were climbing steadily,
proceeding up the ramp.
But, then all of a sudden,
the elevator stopped.
One of them had landed,
while the other one had not.
This made for mass confusion,
and burst bubbles of delusion;
leading to a somewhat sorrowful conclusion.

Curtains fall:  To be continued...

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  • individuality gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    excuse my typing pls i am fcked with beer


    • 2lullabyhaven
      April 11, 2008
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      You only missed a letter here and there, not even enough to mentionsmile

  • individuality gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    ha this genuinelyt did make me alugh ut loud with the first verse then i got more smiles with the second vere into the finalist list you go