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Curiosity

I can’t describe to you
How much you can do
You are my curiosity
You’ve become my toxicity
You make it hard to see
Soon it will be hard to breath
You disorient me
And it makes things hard for me
Well that’s curiosity
It is my toxicity

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  • Breathless Ballons
    May 29, 2008

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    loved this. Very true,and I love the title.

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  • flyingphoenix
    May 22, 2008

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    Curiosity killed the cat....!!


    A good poem here, it has some good flow. I like the angle you've taken here, it is a different way of looking at heartbreak.

    Great write, good luck

    Sunny


  • Solo Wisp gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    curiosity can be toxic in a matter of speaking ... but also, it is the building blocks for discovery, enlightenment, and growth.

    eg


  • Three Doves
    April 12, 2008

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    Please don't allow curiosity to kill you kitten, You write wonderful poetry. Best wishes in life.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah