When I look into the pools of concentrated beauty,
That are misnomered as eyes,
Better described as the essence of light,
When even I kiss your nose,
And we laugh, and I hear Jesus' melody,
And smell you, a perfume by yourself,
By your grace,
I find myself in a whole new place,
A near perfect place,
Just like you,
Just like you,
I love the near invisble imperfections,
The are the best,
Perfect imperfections.
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Comments
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I love those perfect imperfections. They are what make us all so special. Nice poem. Thanks for entering
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AWESOME. i love short poems that hold a lot of meaning and you totally pulled this off. thanks for entering
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thanks tho
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lol its not done yet, i was gonna came back l8er 2 finish
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