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Strange is how I feel

Have you ever felt
That feelings just won’t help
That words they cannot heal
And you mind just won’t be still
Your hearts run out of sighs

Strange would be the name
To describe this painful game
Of loving someone with shame
Because they don’t feel the same

Strange is how I felt
When I gave in to all you dealt
And fell for you
Tried to make one from two

Strange would be the name
To describe this painful game
Of loving you with shame
Because you don’t feel the same

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  • Breathless Ballons
    May 29, 2008
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    I love it! Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • flyingphoenix
    May 22, 2008

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    I like the repetition of the verse, it emphasises the message more.

    Great rhyming and flow here, and you have captured some of the feelings well.

    Thanks for entering, good luck!


  • Three Doves
    April 12, 2008

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    Oh the terrible reality of seeking love and dealing with false pretense. Everyone has a someone hopefully it doesn't take a lifetime to find as we walk in search of sharing with others the love we receive from I Am.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah