Two cold hearts,
Broken dreams,
Wondering what love really means.
Boy meets girl,
Kiss her cheek,
Waiting for her words to speak.
Soul meets light,
Light turns dark,
Finally their love can spark.
Dark remains,
Something new,
She whispers now I love you.
Silence calls,
Life stood still,
Their loving stop never will.
Sounds of bells,
One white dove,
All results of winter love.
A contest entry
- love poems {750 points for gold} by risewiththesmoke.
1000 points, ended April 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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simple but beautiful. i love the first 2 stanzas. just a bit of critique though, the rhyme seems a little forced at times. good overall though and thanks for entering... let me know if you change anything
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