Glinting blades, spinning,
whirling, fast-paced heartbeat.
A dance of pain and heartache.
Match my pace, my love.
Watch my feet, follow their beat.
Move with me, move with me.
Keep it up; I'm movin' quick.
Can you stay up in this dance?
Silver-laced eyes of feigned concern,
Hopeful, hateful, hurtful.
Know this, my lovely,
I can't do this forever.
Match my pace, my lover.
Watch my feet, follow their beat.
Move with me, stay with me.
Keep it up; I'm movin' quick.
Can you stay put in this dance?
Torn asunder, bloody romance.
Never thought it'd come to this.
A whirlwind of emotion;
Blocked out.
Match my pace, my companion.
Watch my feet, follow their beat.
Move with me, stay nearby.
Keep it up; I'm movin' quick.
Can you hold your place in this dance?
Treasured memories;
Shattered mirrors and broken bones.
I didn't think it'd work.
But we danced this dance.
And fell.
Author notes
Recently coming out of a divorce. Haven't written in ages. Assumed I should do so now...
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully written
A wonderful piece of work, as usual, darling. Of course, it hits me hard because I know what it's about, and I see the deeper meaning behind it, but it's still beautifully written.
Though emotions usually blind me in works such as these, I am actually not feeling too many bad ones. xD So, that's good. Hahaha.
I like the way the story progresses. How the mood changes. Would defintely go well in Masquerade for the Violently Fallen CD Ryan and I are working on. xD Hehe.
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I liked this a lot. The way you described/expressed it were unique...the metaphor was clever, too. The repetition worked well.
I'm glad you are happier now!
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This is beautiful, BW. I'm so sorry for your loss. You were able to express it so exquisitely though.
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Oh, don't apologize. I was the one that wanted it and I'm happier now.
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As am I.
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