On wings of soul’s desire
Visceral longing of heart is
Emancipated to experience, to
Realize life’s perfection in
Flooding rivers of love, fullfiling
Long lost passions’ hope
Of being deluged again by
Wonders of the universe
Author notes
Picture: Overflow - Andrew Wyeth
In a list
A contest entry
- E stands for Eroctic by BlueMoon Goddess.
950 points, ended April 27, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Alot said here Allan, great job.. I like it.
Best wishes to you.
Passions

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And I wonder, what you're doing tonight??? Reminded me of that old song for some reason? I guess, in a sense your poem has filled me with an unexplained longing... ??? Hmmm, It's time for me to ponder.... Again!!!


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I like this, it's well thought out and presents several thoughts. Both human and universal. The imagery is psychological rather than physical.
Love,
Amera♥

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Was it "Eroctic" enough?
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