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Overflow

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On wings of soul’s desire
Visceral longing of heart is
Emancipated to experience, to
Realize life’s perfection in
Flooding rivers of love, fullfiling
Long lost passions’ hope
Of being deluged again by
Wonders of the universe








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Picture: Overflow - Andrew Wyeth

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  • Alot said here Allan, great job.. I like it.

    Best wishes to you.

    Passions


  • Ithica silver member
    April 10

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    And I wonder, what you're doing tonight??? Reminded me of that old song for some reason? I guess, in a sense your poem has filled me with an unexplained longing... ??? Hmmm, It's time for me to ponder.... Again!!!


  • Amera gold member
    April 10

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    I like this, it's well thought out and presents several thoughts. Both human and universal. The imagery is psychological rather than physical.

    Love,
    Amera♥