Belligerence aroused
pureness in hostility
Awakening,
crimson forces
[electrifying lost souls]
Elliptical enclosed agitation:
filling the cup,
with disdain
as desolation of decay
darkens
crevassed burdens,
fulfillment.
Hardened ire
expressed
tightening grasps
choking purity
to asphyxia.
[Holding within turmoil’s staff
where humiliation exalted;
twined rope encircled
deeply chafed emotions,
indignation of life’s iniquities
bring forth
the rotting spirit.]
Angered personification
working day by day,
to define aggressiveness
with unholy sums.
Unpardonable grace
separate abominations,
unleashing fury
[raging against the spirit
and the last dying light]
withdrawing oppressive wickedness
from the wealth in the soul.
Consumed by a sin
burning affections through the glass
fragmented memoirs of past bliss
in the hands of a dagger,
stabbed the soul
in mutilation
and withered into,
Oblivion.
Author notes
Round #4
PROMPT:
Wrath
luna-midnight and Stardust-luvr
http://blackeri.deviantart.com/art/The-Seven-Deadly-Sins-WRATH-45063193
I want to thank luna-midnight (Stephanie) for the honor of working with her
A contest entry
- THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 4 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 4 ( award collection!!) by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 22, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate by sheltered.
600 points, ended August 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What else can I say about this one that hasn't already been said? This is one powerhouse of a read! WOW! You two are fantastic together!!!
Congrats on the well deserved Silver!
and love
Nyetta
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Holy Moly~
This is one Powerful piece penned Ladies and it grabs hard
Oy!!!
Hits hard in every place and Excellent collab!!
Bravo Beauties
Love it!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
These lines grab~
Hardened ire
expressed
tightening grasps
choking purity
to asphyxia.
Thank You Both for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You Both in all You do Sweet Souls
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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BTW... you can enter more than one in this...
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huh...lol
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Holy fucking hell this is good!
I will have to read this over and over...
This is actually a collab?
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Wonderful write...think you two have done a splendid job...love the imagery and it flows superbly....congrats on the silver ...
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I absolutely love the wording and intact flow here! The imagery is perfect and wonderfully beautiful!!!
Congrats on the silver!!
pri
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This was a very intriguing poem and a wonderful collaboration. Your wording and formatting plus judicious use of line breaks made this appear to be a seamless effort by one poet. You captured the spirit of your picture prompt. Peace, Liz
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Excellent You Two.
Congrates on a fine write, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
Thanks for sharing, pen on poets!
-Timothy
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awww this is soo beautiful, and i enjoyed working with you too!!!!
wonderfully done
take care
stephanie
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WOW!!!
Wonderfully done Luna and sis... am glad that you could parnter with Star for this contest... you have both done a marvelous job on this... amazing work taking the feeling and giving it a visage to behold. Best to you both in the contest!!
Mouser
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hey hey hey! Im stephanie, and i wastold we gets to do a collab together ^_^
so message me or something and we can work it all out =) -
Awwww, sorry dear sis, that you got partnered with a whiney, stuck in his ways poet that cannot step beyond the bounds of his own narrow view. A fool that follows his own "nose" will find himself in for a big fall, as he will not see the cliff he steps off of.
Do not think you should be penalized for anothers short sightedness.
Mouser -
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My new partner has a true compassionate spirit for others - i just hope I wasn't too much trouble as "usual" lol lol
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Hey Stardust-luvr
Congrats in making it this far
This round will be really different.
You have been grouped with
Bazza
The name of your group is 'Wrath'
You have to let me know which one u chose out of the 3 after deciding with your partner.
The links are on Wrath. Chose any 1 from the contest page.
You can blow ur photo up to view the picture mor clearly.
Put ur link in authors notes.
After you have chosen the picture. You have to write a poem with joint effort.
That is as many paragraphs/verses/lines you write will be a joint effort.
You write the first para/lines, she the second and this goes on till ur poem is finished.
Both of you will be posting the same poem on your page.
If ur a gold member u can add the pic u have used and highlight the lines u wrote or else just leave a message in your author notes explaining. Dont forget to write the name of your group and partner.
Only 2 groups will be going ahead.
Try commenting on the other entries as well.
Anything else ask me.
luv n peace
pri
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