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[ Rolling pages ]

Rolling pages
words circling in my mind
trying to find my voice
to put my thoughts down on paper
unsure of what I write
not knowing the response
I try so hard to find the muse
but lately it has left me
nothing seems to help me along
maybe some time away will help
maybe my friends have some ways
to show me what this pen
is supposed to do...

Rolling pages
words circling in my mind
but nothing to form
a brilliant poem...

I am empty and drained
perhaps I need to slow down
perhaps I should focus on me
and then my pen will start
to flow again!

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I am uninspired maybe one of my many friends here can help me write again

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 14
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    Awe,

    You know my sweet niece how much I love and adore your sweet soul! You're my loving If you ever need some help, you can let me know, and we'll pen a collab or something. I hope you come back someday soon, and that this new year is being good to ya! Know you are loved, Uncle Timothy


  • Desire gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    Wowzers!!

    Gosh~
    How did I miss this one

    Oooooooooooooh I have had many of those days where my quill just passed out and even CPR did not help
    but You sure penned a Lovely one here...even thoughts to paper is therapeutic
    Loved it!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too Beautiful
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Robin Candor
    April 12, 2008

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    I am struggling with "Writer's Junk" right now. I finish something or work on something and read it back to myself only to say, "Man, I know I can write better than this?" Perhaps I'm uninspired or just have nothing important to say at this moment. The strange thing is that this is the first time I have ever tried to write when it just won't cooperate at all. I feel for you because I know the feeling my dear. Be well and it will pass I assure you. RC


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 10, 2008

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    I agree with your last stanza darling, take a breath and focus on you cause you are hella important and need to think about yourself


    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda

  • mcfreeman
    April 10, 2008

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    Writer's Block?

    It's terrible. I recommend dreaming. Listening to music at bedtime..drifting as a song plays...brings me to a dream state. But once dreaming...the trick (for me) was waking up and writing down what my mind was working on.
    It cured it after one week, twenty poems, and I write to music now always.
    Good luck.


  • Malabu
    April 10, 2008

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    dont sweat the small stuff...wanting to write and feeling you need to write is not the same as inspired to write or urge to write...there is nothing wrong with you...we all have something to say...we just dont feel the moment is right to write...this to me is muse on the blink...when you are ready...the words will flow


    and just think...you wrote a lovely poem...on how you wish to write....and here it is....no matter what....
    just breathe

    Mal


  • StarEyes
    April 10, 2008

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    Tessa,

    I know those feelings only too well hon! I feel like that some days I think we all do. I love how you did this..

    Sometimes when I am going through this, I pick up the dictionary and start with the letter "A" and just start putting words down, and sometimes actually turn out something, look through the freewrites to if something there will spark an idea, or just sit and read until something sparks my muse.


    But anyways, those are just food for thought.

    Ek is lief vir jou altyd

    Nyetta

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