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the good times

many days and years ago
your heart reached out and touched my soul
within my reach, your kiss nearly crossed my lips

just like a dream, i see you there
shining out from the dark, grey waves in your hair
within my reach, your kiss nearly caught my lips

time races past like a shooting star
no distance between where we were, where we are
within my reach, your kiss sweetly crossed my lips

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    We can never really leave those memories behind, can we?
    That is what makes the hurt to see love drifting away a little bit more bearable, to cherish the good memories of the past.
    Such beautiful poem my dear Kate


  • petrichor
    April 10, 2008
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    oh i really liked this, was very sweet and made me smile. i think what would have made it better, is if 'your kiss sweetly crossed my lips' was only in the alst line and the other two stanzas built up to that. if you understand what i mean? lovely poem anyway.

    <3


  • individuality gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    ah the good times, we can recall them from the past and smile and we can make new ones as we live in the here and now, it is all good