Let the sun shine
I'm safe in the day
Let's stop time
And live forever this way
You're on my mind
But so far away
But I'll be fine
Let the sun shine on me
Let the sun shine
Chase these shadows away
Give me more time
To see you this way
Let your love shine
You're so far from me
But I'll be fine
Let the sun shine on me
But the sun keeps setting
And I can't hide
From memories
Of days by your side
And I'm alone here
In the dark of the night
And I beg for the day
Looking east for the light
Let the sun shine
Ease this chill inside
And I'll be fine
Chase this shadow from my mind
But I'm cornered
By my fear everynight
Bring the sunrise
Let the sun shine on me
A contest entry
- Inspire me!!! come on all you fab writers out there!!! by PrInCeSsOfRoCk.
650 points, ended April 28, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hoodwinked
Hmmm, with the repeated verses, it reminds me of lyrics. This poem expresses deep emotions of loss. At least that is what I was able to determine from the poem. Congrats on the bronze trophy. -
bright and bold!
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wow this is awesome...seriously...i read it twice just cause its so great. its something i relate to so much specially the last 2 stanzas...i feel that every night, in the day you can hide but at night its not so easy specially lately. but there was such a great sense of light and hope and peace in here to, it made me feel like i could breathe. i know im rambling on but i loved it
this is the sort of poem i was looking for. great work and thank you for entering.
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