when i look at the sky,
i see clouds sitting in the sky,
i see birds soaring to the south,
and i see faces,
i see all of the faces of the dead ones i loved watching me,
they look down at every aspect of my life,
and judge if i deserve what i have,
so when i look up,
there will always be people looking down.
what do you think. please tell truth if it sucks, then it sucks
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aww.. This was a sad one...You created an image that a lot of people can relate with...well done!
Jetleena
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It is not in me to tell someone that the inner recesses of their heart sucks. I feel truth in the words you have written. Continue to read it and read it and read it. Poetry is also an investment, one that should always be made bigger and better..
I encourage you to look up and look past those faces. There is One who looks at you and not down upon you.
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