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If I Were To Leave First

If I were to leave first
Do not be sad
Just remember to cherish
The time we’ve had
I will forever love you
With all my heart
And even in death
We’ll never part
This is not farewell
It’s not goodbye
For I will be waiting
So please don’t cry
It’s time to stop mourning
Time to let go
It’s time to dry your tears
Give life a hello
If I were to leave first
Overcome the pain
Live life to the fullest
Till we meet again

 

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  • sense surreal gold member
    January 17

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    beautiful poignant words

    I can't help but be sad at this
    but this is a painful truth we must have to face someday


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 7

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    wonderful

    do not be sad when it is over, be happy that it was, the very advise my teacher gave to be, very wise words my friend


    • Lee Tai Wah
      January 9
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      Hi Drag aine

      Thank you. wise teacher you've got there.

      • Draig aine gold member
        January 9
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        Yes,he is

        a very special man, teach, lover, friend,so many things to me, a free spirit, yrt we are connected through time. Your words,hit me between the eyes, \i thought, hmm another very wise soul


  • Summer52
    April 10, 2008

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    But if I were to leave first,
    Don't forget the happy times
    And good memories we shared
    Here in AllPoetry, friend Lee.


    Summer51


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Ah, Lee,
    the emotions run up and down the scales.
    Comforting words you have written.

    Aesthete

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