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How Will I Know

Love runs deep
across miles so vast
and time means nothing
while in loves grasp;
but what happens to you
is unknown to me,
so if something happens,
how will I know?

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  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    April 12, 2008
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    awesome

    I really liked it. I only wish it was a bit longer. I really liked lines 1-4.


  • adsaige
    April 11, 2008

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    i really don't know, how will you or i know? shall i make arrangements to make it possible to know. even more, would you want to know? such hard, painful questions.


  • Nikki Rowles
    April 10, 2008

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    very sweet, cute, you get the idea...it's not really my style but I like this thank you for entering