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The masked

 



Blissfully,
he sat beneath solitude
in the chaotic turbulence of city
but underweighing
and overweighing conotations
have softly endeared in mind
  like bank of heartbeats
    shut down in frustration.

  ~Masquerade~



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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    I enjoyed your choice of language, particularly "shut down in frustration". You have captured this soul's hopelessness in a tender way. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz