that thought in my head will never go away,
when you told me to get under the covers and shut up,
you did stuff to me that is too hard for me to explain without crying,
and when you said you were sorry,
it was just a lie because you went and did the same thing to my sister,
now forever will be scared by you,
we cant trust anyone because of you,
i cant even be near my own father wiuhout being scared,
i hope you read this,
because then youll find out what my life has become,
and how its all your fault.
what do you think. please tell truth if it sucks, then it sucks
Comments
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Oh wow this is so horrible.
I know what abuse feels like, and my friend was raped.
This doesn't suck because it's some of your deepest feelings.
No one can tell you that that sucks.
I think you need to work a structure, if you want this to be poetry, right now it sounds like anger and sadness which is alright.
but if you want poetry you do need to adapt it.
-now forever will be scared by you,
we will.
take care.
<3
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