Can't you see
The fire in my eyes
I hope you do because
I'm looking right through
So transparent like
A pack of selfish lies
One should have stayed at one
I hate the person you've become
Why do I
Even try
Why does it matter
You'll do it anyway
What do I
Even care
When you hate the thought of me
Breathing your air
Can you feel
The ice in your veins
'Cause you've grown so cold
Discard the life that remains
So sharpened like
A thousand stabbing knives
One should have stayed at none
I hate the person you've become
Why do I
Even try
Why does it matter
You'll do it anyway
What do I
Even care
When you hate the thought of me
Breathing your air
Why do I
Even try
Why does it matter
You'll do it anyway
What do I
Even care
When you hate the thought of me
Breathing your air
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. How can anyone not comment on this? I think this is wonderful. I have written some lyrics kind of similiar before. About society. So much ugliness can inspire some of the greatest works. It's amazing what humanity can do huh? I loved this. Never stop, because these are very good.


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Guess I'm for the most part undiscovered, lol.
However, this piece was about how people have changed on me once I get close to them..and discard me, as I bear no further interest to them.
Mainly about my ex, Amber...toward the end, it seemed like everything I did annoyed her.
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Awh. Nobody is doomed to be alone.
I can understand that feeling of being discarded. Only being used for what suites them. A shame really. -
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It's true, that hopelessness can grab you easily. I have to keep my chin up and trudge onward.
I have to remain strong. Someone will come along and it will be wonderful once again. I have to hang on to hope, because it's all I have at this point..
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