One sound is all it takes
To awaken me from a sound sleep
Lone voice on the other side
Telling me not all is right
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
Though fallen from above
Fighting what comes from below
One group of people
To stand in the way of all evil
Lead by one person who desires not
But takes up the mantle
Leading those who need to be shown the way
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
Though fallen from above
Having what it takes
To stop evil from spreading its wings
Unwanted leadership
That was the only salvation
To pull an individual back from the edge
Before it was too late
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
Everything would have been different
Leaving many to unfamiliar fates
Instead of leading toward
Never ending friendships
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Knowing what it takes
To keep going on
After losing everything
In untold battles
You are the fallen angel
To save those who are unknowing
To keep safe those held dear
Everyone one is important
Even those left behind
In your eyes they are wanted
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
Though fallen from above
Fighting what comes from below
Staying in the rear
Making sure all are secure
Trying to play the martyr
Not knowing any other way
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
Though fallen from above
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter
You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
You are the fallen angel
Our guardian angel
A contest entry
- Simple Fun by CanadianGirl1.
300 points, ended April 14, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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Great RP
I loved the effort, and the message shown through very vividly!
I cannot write like this...
Best wishes in the contest!
~ James ~
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One of the things I think I liked most about this poem is the repetition *sp*
"You are the fallen angel
Protecting our lives with your own
Broken wings a shelter"
You have done a great job with this, and I thank you for your entry -
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CanadianGirl1
Thankyou very much. I love this poem and believe it be one of the best ones I have done thus far. It took me awhile to get it to the way that it is now. So I am very glad that you like it.
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I wrote this one about a very good and close friend to whome I owe much.
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