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A Farewell But Never A Goodbye

The time has come
To part our ways
You to your path
And I to mine
These few years together
Have been sweeter than any others
With laughter and joy
Sown in our hearts
But there comes a time
When two who know each other so well
Must part ways and say fare-thee-well
Though we part unwillingly
There shall come a time
When the same two hearts call to one another
To come together and live again
But till then dry your tears
Hold your head up high
It is only a farewell
Never a goodbye
We shall meet again
When the time is right
Do not despair or hold your sorrow
That will make parting all the harder
The heart does not forget
Though the mind may try
I bid you farewell
And leave you with a promise
That when two hearts
That knows one another so well
Call out to one another
To come together and live again
Our hearts again will know
Laughter and tears
Joy and sorrow
Happiness and fear
Till then I bid fare-thee-well
But never goodbye
Until we meet again
Wipe away your tears
Smile for awhile
As I bid you a farewell
But never a goodbye
Never a goodbye

Author notes

I'm 19 going on 20 and I am a certified Chef, i hope to one day own my own restuarant. I love reading and cooking. My favorite colors are purple, black, red and dark blues. My favorite anamials are felines and canines. I have a very close group of friends and we try and spend as much time together as possible seeing how most of us are busy with school, or work.

I wrote this poem in dedication to all of my family members that have passed on over the years.

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  • glitterydoom
    August 27, 2008
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    I really like your poem. I hate saying goodbye to my friends even if its just for a day

    what part would you like in my family?


    • Angelfire2007
      August 27, 2008
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      Broken Bambi

      Thank you for your kind comment. I too find it hard to say goodbye to friends and family so often times I don't say goodbye, instead I'll say something like see you later or something simmilar.

      I gues I would be an older sister or cousin.

      • glitterydoom
        August 27, 2008

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        yeah, I say see you later too or just shorten it down to bye

        You can be my older sister or cousin, I dont mind


  • daviscth silver member
    August 1, 2008
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    Congrats on your silver. This is such a heart felt piece.


    • Angelfire2007
      August 1, 2008
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      daviscth

      Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm gald that you liked it.


  • sca
    July 28, 2008

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    I love the emotion. But I could never part with my lover and come together again later... I'd rather just deal with the distance and keep the relationship continuous.

    (That said, your poem's probably the more realistic scenario).

    => Jess

    • Angelfire2007
      July 29, 2008
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      sca

      Thank you for your comment.

      When I wrote this I was kind of playing around with losing the one you love due to death and coming back together again in another life time but it can also apply to if you find someone who you really love and end up breaking up and then having to deal with the seperation or if you have a loved one who has to leave for like the military or something.

      But again thank you for your comment.


  • Meroza
    July 26, 2008
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    This is a good poem.

    Best of luck


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    nice way to remember someone
    best of luck to you.

    Riftkin


    • Angelfire2007
      July 24, 2008
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      Riftkin

      Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad that you enjoyed it.


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22, 2008
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    Amazing! This poem does give me hope...Thank you so much


    • Angelfire2007
      July 22, 2008
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      sensualbutterfly

      I'm glad I was able to help...and you are very welcome.

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