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[ I can offer nothing ]

I can offer nothing
but take my hand
I'll take you some where
you understand

you so alone
but I am too
I've never had nothing
but I never had you

so I ask you once
a plead for strength
that and oh yes
save my life

because only you can
of that I am certain

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