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The Floor Fell Through

There it goes again.
Slipped right out from under my feet.
The floor disappears and I'm left
free falling again.
A sickening thud escapes
as I land flat on my back.
Several miles from where
I started to climb back up last time.

I can't see the top anymore.
I'm to far below the average.
I scream and cry as I think I
almost made it. I was climbing
and getting higher. One little finger
slip and the bottom fell through.
Again and again, the proverbial rat in a maze
I struggle to find my way out.

Here I go again....

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  • iwrestledabearonce
    November 20
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    hmmm

    i know the feeling. l've fallen from grace all the way down to nothing but we all have to keep trying to make it to the top no matter how many times we fall
    very well written i love it