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Afraid Of You

Settling for a different view,
after everything I've been through.
Forgetting the bad things you do
because I'm afraid of you.

Overlook the dark circled eyes.
Continue to listen to the lies.
There will never be anything new
because I am afraid of you.

Cover up all of the bruises again,
forever committing the ultimate sin.
Can only see in shades of black and blue
because I'm still so afraid of you.

It won't stop you when I'm gone.
You'll find another one before long
and I will never speak aloud what's true
because I'll always be afraid of you.

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H4rd Kisses

Option 2

"Your love left me blanketed in bruises and insanity"

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  • natchstucco
    April 9, 2008

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    very nice rhythm and flow. well done on the option that you selected. good luck in the contest.

    Interesting repetative concept.somewhat like a song.