Think of what you tell me,
as you cover me with seduction.
make my heart race and my blood burn,
as your fierce eyes gaze into mine.
See me as who i am,
When you seal my person,
with your sweet but harsh kisses.
Where i lay wondering,
What you would do if i spilled my blood.
Would you come to me and tell me everything,
would be alright?
But it won't. I feel alone.
I'm destruction.
I won't say good-bye.
My heart freezes,
My hands turn cold,
My lips are blue,
as my body turns to stone,
you whisper you love me.
you come to see me as my blood still drips,
you leak a single tear that turns to thousands.
Death is overcoming your beloved.
My life begins to sink as my last breath is my last drip of living essence.
My sanctuary is up in heaven with my savior and my king.
I drown and leave you.
Your world,my world,
black, alone.
Never again to be blood crush.
A contest entry
- I Want Gore, Erotica, Laughter, Love, Anything Great by So Strange.
720 points, ended May 16, 2008, 54 entries
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Comments
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Good luck in my contest. I enjoyed this because of the emotion you put into it. I think you may have a chance in the contest. Keep up the great work.
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thanks
thanks. it meant alot for me to write this. it was written subjected by wat has happened to me in the past.
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thanks? what exactly is that supposed to mean??
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