a shaving of
silverlight
Singular amongst the
nothingsomething.
focal point of Beauty
framed by a shifting
Puzzle of budding crowns.
against a background of
vanishing Color.
annunciated goodbyesongs
sung into the inbetween
slowly turning Bridge of
yelloworangeredblueblack,
drawn by starry hand.
Silence (listen),
as the world turns
A contest entry
- ONE DECENT CONTEST FOR YOU.... by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what part spoke the most to you?
Comments
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Imagery is wonderful! Its so smooth and flows into the mind very peacefully! What dissappoints me is the way u have framed it. Of course its ur choice but somehow it obstructs the flow! i will give it to you for the imagery!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
pri
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Love it.
Beautiful imagery.
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