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A Wish

A wish:
To be denied of accepted.
To ignore the pounding,
Or embrace it.
With the pain of heartbreak.
Paired with the sweetness of love.
The need,
The desire,
To be loved-
Calls to your innermost self.
And with beautiful precision-
Extracts your heart
From the thick ice,
Of previous heartbreaks.
The beautiful tide of love,
Covers you from head to toe.
Even with all the pain,
You wish this will last-
      Forever.

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  • EntombedCrystalRose
    April 22, 2008

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    A nice piece of poetry, with a good beat to it. Once problem... Its hard to read as the purple blends into the black backgound
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