Births of souls and deaths of hearts,
a small torrent of emotion unleashes.
A tunnel portrait that causes pain,
to die and then to be born again.
Death of what was and birth of what could be,
love at first sight matched with eternal knowing.
Mother nature at her best sort of work
and humans at their worse.
Revival and retrieval saw their ways onto out Earth,
now we face what will become. If only everyone
could see that most people can survive with friends
who make it through the difficult conversion to old to new.
See a whole new person through the same lens,
a person who used to be calm is now outspoken.
Living a life of happiness through the suffered strife,
making the best of what could and should be.
Birth and Death unite as one
to have see an ultimate power.
The gift of Life and what can end it,
terrifies every being.
Author notes
I don't think it's my best, but I guess it'll work. But it's the first thing I've wrote on Allpoetry that microsoft word didn't catch a spelling mistake I had to fix! I am a very bad speller. >.>
A contest entry
- THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 3 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think please!
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Torrent of emotions unleashes
I love this line! It brings an image of lava swiftly spreading across the city...u know in a flow! U create an image here...very strong..one can visualize the image very clearly and also very vividly!!!
MY FAV LINES
See a whole new person through the same lens,
a person who used to be calm is now outspoken.
Living a life of happiness through the suffered strife,
making the best of what could and should be.
Again, a very beautiful depiction of intellectual mind!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
PS- COngrats for making no spelling error..!!
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