She is the rain that falls on me.
I swim in this flood that fills an ocean.
I'm not afraid of this moving water,
only the things that I might miss when it stops.
I know there is a sunset we'll watch together
That colors each other over this beautiful water.
The midnight rain comes to fall on me.
I close my eyes and she fills what I see.
With her hair on my skin and her hand in mine,
Her voice in my ears I hear her thoughts,
and the thunder that shakes the air that we breathe.
It's raining inside us I can hear that too.
There is no light but midnight in this place.
and the pulse of lightning on her face.
I used to watch her fall in the distance,
but now I've felt her come.
It's in this hour she turns to the sky
and gives me the water that touches my lips.
I taste her soul and thirst for her heart
and the warmth of her body I feel inside.
In her hands she holds my heart
drenched with her soul and waterfall.
The sun will rise with the morning shower
but nothing lights the open sea.
She is the rain that falls on me.
A contest entry
- Love Poetry Please by FallingTwilight.
390 points, ended April 16, 2008, 40 entries
Silver trophy winner
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680 points, ended May 10, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all BEST poems you have!!!!~ by SmartBrick.
320 points, ended May 29, 2008, 26 entries
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600 points, ended July 12, 2008, 36 entries
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Comments
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wow.
i got quite a lot out of this and it seems like you put a lot of emotion and a lot of time into this. i believe that love is one of the greatest things on earth. well thanks for entering
and good luck -
Metaphorically I enjoyed the read of this poem. Love fills hearts in so many ways, and the way people touch the soul is unlike any other.
You did a great job!
Thanks for entering the 'Passions' contest, it was my pleasure to read your work. The best of luck to you.
Florida Sunshine
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Lovely
I can't seem to get enough.
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I would like to see better grammar in this piece. Other than that, it was a nice piece.
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wow... i am speechless... there are just some poems that do that to me, and this is one. there is a lot of love in this poem, and i felt like i could feel it all... wow. good job!
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Beautiful!
I truly love your writing. I can't wait to see more!
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