Remember: I’m your best friend,
Remember: All the clothes we would lend,
Remember: All those late night calls,
Remember: All those times we went to the malls,
Remember: The good times, the bad times, and the hard times,
Remember: All the the trees we would climb,
Remember: I’ve always been your friend,
Remember: I’ll be with you ‘till the end.
Author notes
Haha! Yeah...
Missa
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AP name in author's notes please. =]
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Not Bad
I hate to tell you this, but your poem wasn't bad. I actually enjoyed the rhymes, as you didn't overuse one word and didn't use short words that would easily rhyme. You could enter this in another poetry contest since it wasn't terrible. I enjoyed the read, but I'm looking for particulary TERRIBLE poetry. Sorry for the letdown, but I enjoyed your poem a lot -
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o, ok, thanks!
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Awww this was really sweet, and you can really tell its genuine.
great write
♥
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wow. i really liked this. short and sweet right? but in this short amount of time you took to right this, you put a lot of emotion about your friendship. me and jeff are kind of like this (except for the clothes thing. unless its a glove or arm warmer or wristband or...you get the point). but jeff and i are really close. he's like a brother. i mean if i had my way about it, we'd be brothers for real. it seems that you and your friend are this way as well. well, i really enjoyed reading this. good luck and good write.
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yay! thank you for resubmitting.
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im very sad, this is about the 10th poem i have to DQ because you didnt read.
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