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[ One spark ]

One spark
Small and weak
Steadily stronger
As we speak

One spark
Little Life
Making imprints
On our hearts

Every life
Is strong
Makes a difference
To someone

The memories
Short and few
Locked away
and made immortal

One spark
Small and weak
Steadily stronger
with us forever

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  • Wydra
    May 5, 2008

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    YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

    great job! this represents how we can alll make a difference. very encouraging! love the repetition and good choice of words! keep up the good work!


  • Angel Of Heaven99
    April 17, 2008

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    That's all it took...was one spark...one spark of love This is wonderful and I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing this very special poem. I will cherish it always! Many blessings to you!


  • liduen silver member
    April 10, 2008

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    Great piece! You might want to change the title to "One Spark" so that it doesn't have the [] things around it. I love how the first stanza is almost the last stanza except for the last line. Great write and good luck in the contest