Say to me my darling dear
all the things I want to hear
The words I speak to you each day
that says my love will ever stay
Hold me close my darling dear
let me feel your sweetness here
Deep into my dream tonight
of me and you in pure delight
Kiss me soft my darling dear
I'll cry for you a happy tear
To show the love I have for you
is from my heart and very true
Say to me my darling dear
I'm so glad that you are here
For you are my dream tonight
that turns into our delight
Say to me my darling dear
you know my love for you is pure
For I gave to you tonight
wings to let our love take flight
Say to me my darling dear
these three words I need to hear
When I say that I love you
tell me that you love me too
Author notes
This is one of my latest of my love for her
A contest entry
- Romance Challenge (Men Only) by melphleg.
450 points, ended April 27, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes- freewrite/rhyme by ichigosama.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love's Many Faces by Silly Rabbit..
600 points, ended May 22, 2008, 56 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something Old Something New Rhyme by piccola.
600 points, ended April 27, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - CAN YOU RHYME... or are you scared.... by righteousme.
1050 points, ended April 25, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is amazing and the strict wording you use in each verse is not nearly as limiting as it should be, this is fantastic! i hope you do find that special one you're looking for.
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wow this was really good i loved this poem you did a reallly nice job on it keep up the great job
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not what i asked for but i am not DQing.. thanks for entering...
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I'm sorry; I loved this poem but I specifically asked you to help me keep it anonymous and some of the comments mentioned you by name. You could have deleted those comments. I'm sorry because I really like this one.
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A most beautiful write, and something we all want to hear, good luck in the contest, Josie
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This is a beautiful old fashioned poem of love, simple and heart felt and written from a loving soul.
All the best in the contest...Sue
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Old fashioned romance to the nth degree. The repetition of the first line enhanced this particular verse.Best wishes in this contest!
Shana -
I enjoyed this. I liked the repetition, the simplicity seemed romantic almost old fashioned, lovely. Good luck, very nice poem!
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Judging Time
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My darling dear..what woman hasn't dreamed of being called that? Very artful use of rhyme. Not many people can pull this off successfully, but you have. Bravo on a beautiful poem.
-Niur Tarow -
I love the repitition of "my darling dear", and rhyming in this is absolutely amazing and makes it flow easily and makes it all the more beautiful.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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ichigosama
this is a wonderful piece of write. you know my love for you is pure; tell me that you love me too. whoever you have there must really be special. it's beautiful and has a nice flow to it. thanks for entering. -
excellent~
Really enjoyed reading this one...
Good rhythm and flow...
Has all the qualities the contest calls for....
Romance, tenderness and love...
And just per chance a lover's dream to go with it
Best of luck in the contest..hope you pop over and read mine as well...
Oops well ya gotta you entered this one so you have to read and vote for us ladies...
Again best of luck...
And nice to meet ya as well
Susan~~~
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Very nice. Good rhythm, good rhyme, good flow. It's a simple but very sweet piece. The repetition of "darling dear" does not get monotonous.
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