What do I do?
I disagree with her.
He doesn't know what he did.
I understand anger.
I don't understand her.
She's taken it too far.
He stands ther confused.
I'm stuck between them.
I can't get out.
She won't let me help.
I care for them both.
I don't want to lose her.
But she took it too far.
I've had enough.
IT HAS TO END.
I can't take this anymore.
Let me out.
Fix this.
IT MUST END NOW.
We're falling apart.
You say you love him like a brother.
If that's true...
Why are you saying you hate him?
We need to solve this.
Only then I can come out.
But for now...
I'm stuck.
A contest entry
- INSPIRE ME! by calendar girl.
800 points, ended April 28, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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i feel like this poem has a lot of meaning to you, i'm just a little lost as to what it's about
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it is a little confusing now that i read it
when i write a poem i don't read over what i write
poems are about soul
they shouldnt be edited
but the poem is about this arguement between my two friends James and Melissa i got stuck inbetween them but luckly its subsided
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