Life is a crazy messed up game,
where no one seems to win.
Everyone can put up points,
but the score never changes.
Moving fast, slowing down,
never going much past start.
And yet when I am on the brink,
of throwing my hands up in disgust,
I just have to CRANK IT UP,
and simply dance it out!!
Author notes
This contest came at just the right time. I always need a chance to remind myself to "just dance it out". Stress can over take you so quickly it is nice to have that vacation from reality if just for a few moments!
A contest entry
- Girls Only Prompt by ChrissyJean.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm really sorry I was supposed to give you and HM I feel so bad I didn't put enough in...I'm so sorry!
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My bf really really liked your poem and asked me to give you this award on his behalf. Good job!
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Excellent---Dance away all your inner-Frustrations!!
--Best of luck in the contest!
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awww!!!
i loved it great work
all the best to you in the contest -
This is some great advice! Dancing is good for the soul... So party on!!!
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looks like i have some serious competition, this is an awesome work! best of luck!
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Very Good
I love your use of metaphors and imagery! Keep it up!
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