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drunk

drunk
==========================
hear the gentle breeze
as it brushes upon
your lips

the sweet melancholy
of her lusciousness
proceeding to entwine your soul

bewildered
and drunk
off the sweet, sweet water of life

your heart's knot tightens
as your mind begins
to flee

your body remains
as the opposing ex-streams spiral inwardly
creating the essence
of what once was


.n.v.


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