Hey girl
you were doing fine
and now you're wrecked from the inside
Hey girl
this pain is nothing new
and he just doesn't care for you
Why can't you just let him go?
Why can't you just let him go?
Hey girl
you had such peaceful days
and now they've all gone away
Hey girl
you used to be so strong
but then he came along
Why can't you just let him go?
Why can't you just let him go?
I know that love is painful
and it's tearing you apart
and it's murdering your heart
Why don't you listen to yourself
instead of focusing on somebody else
who only brings you down
Only brings you down...
Hey girl...
Hey girl...
Hey girl...
Hey girl...
Hey girl
you hold onto a little hope I know
and that's why you wont let him go
Author notes
I don't care if any part of it is cliche. I don't care is the rhymes are cheap.
I like this one.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This must be a note to yourself. I see it, read it, and I liked it somehow. Nevermind the cliches... they're partly what makes the poem good enough.
Cool write. Blessed be.
-Blanche -
love it
i like this! i understand it compleatly, and im in this position right now sadly... nice to know im not alone!
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