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Lifetime

like supple dew of the mornings

i will be there to greet you

enjoying every moment that passes

like crisp air in the deeps of fall

i will sing my song behind you

following you where ever you go

like a mitten on your fair hand

i will caress you for a lifetime

for saying i love you

means i will be there forever

 

Author notes

i did this as the answer of the girl from the pictures love

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  • Riftkin gold member
    May 1, 2008
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    wonderful poem for the prompt and thanks for placing it into this extra contest for me Riftkin

  • Merciful-Manner
    April 28, 2008
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    good job

    This is a very nice write good luck


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    wonderful. this is a beautiful poem you got here


  • Cesarean
    April 22, 2008
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    very optimistic, i like it a lot.


  • Silences Voice
    April 21, 2008

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    I like it.

    Thanks for entering. I really like it. It's short but sweet and sets a good mood for me right now. Thank you and good luck!


  • SchizoChic
    April 19, 2008
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    Pretty poem.


  • Sprite silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    This is very nice. It flows well and I love the line about the mittens. Yes, I agree. This is lovely. And it says something too. Thanks for entering.

    ~ Joyce

    Make sure you put the interpretation of two lines of the example poem in your author notes.


  • swimmeroks
    April 14, 2008
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    Very nice job! i love it!


  • Midgetbridgey
    April 13, 2008
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    short but sweet great poem

    Goodluck!


  • calendar girl
    April 12, 2008
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    All i have to say it aaaaawwwwweeeeeeeeeeeee


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 11, 2008
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    well it is a good poem!!


  • fall from grace
    April 9, 2008

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    Very good poem... very good. It's amazing. I can feel the love that is radiating off of it. Amazing. Congrats


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 9, 2008
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    thats really powerful, it gives off a strong feeling of devotion. keep it up!


  • named.disaster--x
    April 9, 2008
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    I like it .... it is short and yet still has a lot of meaning to it, great write
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