Twist and bend
Coil and squelch
Brake his mind
For hurting you
He doesn’t know
How defiled feels
Rip out his heart
Wring it dry
Smear and scorch
Hell and damnation
Demons worst deed
Not near enough
Nothing adds up
Nothing equal to
What he did
By touching you
Author notes
This poem came out of my feelings twards my friends sexual abuser.
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
I like what this piece presents in just a few short lines. Some writers are unable to capture such full emotion and imagery in such a short piece, but you succeeded marvelously at it. The words in this poem grab your attention and hit your soul, whether you've had experience with this kind of darkness or not. Thanks for sharing. -
Wow,
this is such a powerful piece,
I'm almost speechless.
I love the lines :
Rip out his heart
Wring it dry
The imagery created by them is simple amazing.
I love the shortness of this piece.
It's short but to the point.
You've said more in few words than some could with thousands.
Well done =] A beautiful poem full of emotion.
Arc-En-Ciel--x
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Thank you this poem obiously has a lot of personal meaning for me and it means so much that you like what i've writen. Again thank you
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