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Leaving

I wish that I knew
Just what to say
Or what I could do
To make the pain go away

I want to be past this
I want it to end
I want to be with you
My heart needs to mend

I'm going to have to do
A little more with my time
In order to get me by
But it feels like a crime

I'm gonna have to go away
And leave you to your thoughts
I want this to all work out
And i'm giving all i've got

I don't want to do this
But I think it's for the best
It's going to hurt me very much
But it will let my mind rest

I'll think of you everyday
I hope you know it's true
I'm doing this for us baby
That's how much I love you

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  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    This has a great rhythmic beat to it, and good rhyme. Very well written. You did a great job. Very nice.
    Kelli