I look into the mirror staring at my bright green eyes
The continuous changing size of my pupils as they focus in and out
He says that he loves my eyes
In my eyes you can see my every emotion-my pain, happiness, and love
They say that through eyes you can see into a persons' soul
Look into my eyes and read me like a book with no secrets or lies
These bright green eyes have cried millions of tears
They have seen many powerful things,some things they regret
He tells me that he can look into my eyes forever
These bright green eyes shine
A contest entry
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500 points, ended May 20, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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A very pretty poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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thanks
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Im a sucker for green eyes
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then ud love me!
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o i do i do
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no way lol
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Beautiful
I am sure through your eyes we can all see a beautiful soul. Wonderful work my friend
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Wow ok. this is one of my favorits!!
Wonderful!
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really thanks!? i love when ppl really like my poetry
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This is truely a beautiful piece, I really like your second last line, "He tells me that he can look into my eyes forever" It is so sweet, and it gives the reader the vibe that no matter what you have been through or have done in the past he won't judge you because he is looking into your soul, and will continue to love you. Fantastic piece! Best of luck in the contest, thank you for commenting on mine as well.
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Wow this is beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. I felt the emotion coming from it. Amazing...
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love it
im glad that you feel that your eyes are the best part of your body, i love the flow and the emotions you have put into this poem, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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Beautiful write!
I always wished my eyes were green...
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this was really good! and you can see everything in a person's eyes. u can tell if their hurt or really happy! i loved this!
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