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Gummy Bear March

Red, yellow, orange, green,
Their army's causing quite a scene.
Though colorful and small they are,
They're loved and hated, near and far.
Marching along side by side,
They've got nothing left to hide.
But they're with me,
They're on my team,
It no longer matters how things seem.
They march through the town and down the street,
Keeping time with tiny feet.
Everyone stares, stiff as starch,
'Cuz quite a sight is the Gummy Bear March!

Author notes

Okay, definitely option 3... I wrote this in Wellness today, because I was bored... sadly there was no mountain dew involved. =( Or real gummy bears for that matter... it's tragic I know! XD

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  • Missa
    March 25

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    OMG!!! OUR ARMY!!! Btw, i found a college that offers a taking over the world 101! but i think it was a fake site...idk...its in germany!


  • HereComesTheSun
    September 12, 2008
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    haha great poem i love the first two lines :]


  • mitchie
    August 13, 2008
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    cool thanks for entering my contest


  • calendar girl
    April 12, 2008

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    OOOoooh my goodness, this made me smile. I'm gonna add this to favorites, so on days when i'm feeling down, i'll get happy again.


  • ReachingForStars
    April 9, 2008

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    No mountain dew? you poor thing!
    nicely written, and brought a smile to my face for sure!

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